I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, August 28, 2018
My Netball Poem
This is my Netball poem.
For literacy we have been writing types of poems. Every week a teacher introduces a new type of poem to us, some are hard and some are not. Last week we started writing Cinquain poems. Here is my Netball one.
I chose to do one about Netball because I play Netball every Friday we call it "Winter Sports"
If you have any feed-back then please comment.
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Hey Shreya, Look who's back Kylie. I know it's been a while but I commented on this post so here it is. I really like netball too so I think we would be great friends. I like how you added playing with your team it is enjoyable because it makes me feel like everybody in my team should join in as well. Maybe next time could you try coming up with a more catchy title. Do you play netball at school or for a club?
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