I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, August 28, 2018
My Summer Acrostic Poem
For Literacy we have been doing poems about 2 weeks ago we started to do Acrostic poems, out of my five that I wrote this one is my favorite. This is about Summer.
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Wow Shreya, this is a great poem. It took me into Summer, sitting in my back yard relaxing with a lemonade ice-block... bliss! I agree rain is the WORST. Maybe you could explain more what an Acrostic poem is for your readers as I am sure not everyone knows?
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Wow Shreya, this is a great poem. It took me into Summer, sitting in my back yard relaxing with a lemonade ice-block... bliss! I agree rain is the WORST. Maybe you could explain more what an Acrostic poem is for your readers as I am sure not everyone knows?
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Wow Shreya this is a great acrostic poem it took me eating ice cream but there is one thing that I am certain about and that is MAKE SURE IT MAKES SENSE
ReplyDeleteHey Shreya, it's Angie here. Good job! This reminded me of when it was still Summer. I like how you wrote this poem. Maybe next time add more punctuations, and can you explain what an acrostic poem is? Because I think some people doesn't know what an acrostic poem is. Yet, I like it! Well done!
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