I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 8 and in 2021 I will be a year 9. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Tuesday, March 26, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
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Hey Shreya,
ReplyDeleteI really like you video. The volume of the music is good for the volume of your voice. When you have put it onto your blog it doesn't fit the size very well. Maybe you could go in and edit it to make it smaller? It would be great if you could add a wee description about what you did and whether you liked it too.
- Miss Morgan
Hey Miss Morgan!
DeleteThank you! I'm changing the video size and I'll try to make the text fit in since it doesn't fully come in to the scene.
Thank you
Shreya
Hi Shreya
ReplyDeleteI love your we video. I hope you post more we videos.
The next video you do can you please speak a bet slower and make a longer video.
bye
Hi Shreya its Lita, I really liked your video, I liked the way that the music was on a low volume so we can hear your voice properly, I liked the way how you talked nice and clear so we can understand what your saying.
ReplyDeleteand that's all from me bye.